My partner and I have received feedback on our story. It is still lacking a bit because the climax isn’t completely there and the ending doesn’t occur where it should. It was suggested in class that the story be rearranged in a way that when Scuttles makes his escape, the toy hostages cheer to his retreat and then the boy comes and causes the tidal wave that sink the toys resulting in Super Thimbles smacking his head.
The story that my partner and I had originally developed was that Mr. Scuttles successfully escapes and then the boy comes and causes the tidal wave that sinks the toys. Once Super Thimbles would smack his head it would then go immediately to the alley where scuttles lands. Scuttles is supposed to look cheerful to his escape until the dog approaches then picks him up to carry him away. I do agree the story is lacking somewhere and my partner and I feel confident in the suggestions, so we have decided to follow through with the alternative ending.
Our next goal is to refine our story and storyboard. We both have planned to add more frames for the in-betweens and we’re setting it up for the animated taster. For this week I have focused on adding in-betweens in my portion of the storyboard that included my character. After some more refining we will add audio to our storyboard and play it through as if we were watching the animation itself.
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